sábado

Casi

Karen Kruse


Esta noche oscura

imagino tu mano

contra el vientre sofocada.

Pensando tal vez en mí

o en lo que te llevaste

en aquel tren sin regreso.

Respirarás el polen

que sacuden las ramas

cubiertas con restos

del naufragio.

Cerrarás los párpados

y una combustión,

un grito silencioso

te recordará mis uñas,

mi nuca obediente

bajo tus dedos.

Mis tobillos elevándose

en danza genital.

Y apretarás la sábana

en místico abrazo,

llorando,

triste,

demoledor orgasmo

cuajado de temblor y rabia.

Desazonado, amargo.

Casi tan atormentado

como este poema.




16 comentarios:

Felipe dijo...

Una entrada que es todo un grito existencial en el que el amor y la desventura conviven en vuelo apacible

¡Enorme,por conmovedor!

Mar dijo...

Un poema hrmosísimo, Meri Pas. Me encantó. Me gusta el juego de las dos realidades, la de los amantes juntos y la del amante solitorio, la del momento del amor a cuatro manos y la del de a dos. Y entre los dos planos, el tren que los aparta, el recuerdo en la retina que los junta... Ese vaivén entre la unión y la desunión, feliz y amor, me estremeces.
Un abrazo
PD
Bellísima música y fotos.

Ana Muela Sopeña dijo...

Un poema estremecedor, Meri pas.

Un abrazo
Ana

eloy dijo...

El desamor y la danza de los cuerpos, me gusta esa doble vertiente sobre la que estructuras el poema: por una parte, vientre, nuca, danza genital, demoledor orgasmo, de otra, noche oscura, tren sin regreso, restos del naufragio, grito silencioso, temblor y rabia.

Un placer, leerte Meri Pas.

Laura Caro dijo...

Cuánto dolor causan las rupturas y los recuerdos...
Bello y triste poema. Me hizo temblar por dentro.
Un abrazo enorme y agradecido.

vera eikon dijo...

Atormentado pero hermoso!!!
Un abrazo

elena clásica dijo...

"Esta noche oscura del alma" pareces decir, pues la danza genital y el místico abrazo se ven atormentados en el recuerdo de las uñasm los dedos, los tobillos...
Verdaderamente una escena sofocante de angustia, elevada a una atmósfera erótica y melancólica.
Increíble, Meri Pas, la fuerza con la que te expresas.
Besazos.

Mar dijo...

Gracias Meri Pas por hacerme el honor de estar en tu blog, en la página prinicpal!!!
aún no había venido.
Los cuadros que cuelgas son una maravilla.
Tus poemas, ya te he dicho muchas veces, cómo me llegan.
Un abrazo

María Socorro Luis dijo...

Amor-desamor magníficamente grabado a fuego erótico en tu poema.

Saludos .

Francisco Ramos dijo...

Estoy descubriendo a una persona maravillosa que ama el arte.
Gracias por los poemas.

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